Review: Jill Khoury
On earthwork by Jill Khoury
By Tyler Truman Julian
Jill Khoury’s earthwork immerses readers in a dreamscape of grief and abuse. Departing from more traditional poetics, Khoury instead relies on a kind of associative stream of consciousness to present her speaker’s grief. The collection unfolds in three sections wherein Khoury employs John Mcphee’s “backward e” narrative structure to recount the speaker’s experience of losing an abusive mother. The poems first delve into the anguish of her mother’s death, then step back to reveal the dysfunction of the speaker’s upbringing, including navigating life with a disability and finally examine the aftermath of the loss. Through this narrative structure, the complicated poems of earthwork create a cohesive whole. The abstract poetics balanced with this strong narrative structure results in an engaging and moving collection.
The title, earthwork, stems from the speaker’s mother’s penchant for creating and firing earthen pottery, but there are layers to this word choice. Khoury turns to nature imagery to help her speaker make sense of her mother’s impending death, whereas her mother’s hard realism, passive aggression, and even cruelty ground the speaker’s imaginative flights. Both the speaker’s imaginative leaps and the mother’s incessant pulling back to earth are attempts at making sense of a complicated familial situation. This dynamic begins in the collection’s opening poem, “night cultivars”:
i tell
my mother
the fractured
clay dirt
flowered
against a red
moon
bore a
scratchblossom
all thorns
and dolor
moaned from out
a low stump
when I put my ear
to it
oh
she says
that’s just
a weed
the wind
This poetic exchange, blending pain and whimsy, sets the tone for the collection. Even when the form appears more familiar, as in “curtain colic bassinet calf,” which appears in the collection’s second section, the dynamic continues, illuminating the complicated family history:
the infant’s howl strafes
the mother’s earthwork
the mother’s mare has flown
into the eaves and nested
the infant is captured in a rogue wave
out back / the cornfield crackles
the mother swaddles her own head
in curtains / one eye on the twilight
The collection viscerally captures the dysfunction and power struggle at the core of the mother-daughter relationship presented, as both women grapple with their need for autonomy. Khoury’s masterful control of this disjointedness enhances the collection with remarkable foresight. In “sicker,” Khoury reveals the fact of the mother’s diabetes and the speaker’s congenital nystagmus, portraying a fraught dynamic of competition and blame:
but diabetes is making her
sick & sicker eye hemorrhages special diets home IVs
the surgeons removing bone from her foot & i am
guileless kyle at school has diabetes and he doesn’t have
as many problems as you
go eat your cereal she says
at least i can still ride—
and your eyes
those are my fault
i’m sorry
Even though “she has never asked how much i can see,” the mother both takes blame for the daughter’s disability and sees it as a hindrance to the life she wants to live (“my mother / the storm”). So ensues the complicated power struggle of mother and daughter that lends itself well to the forms and structures already developed in the collection. “cover it up” showcases this struggle and embraces an experimental form:
my mother says i push you so you won’t be dependent on a man / do you see what
it got me / i couldn’t go to college / you will go to college / you father is selfish
and lazy (like you)
[a cup a rip a cur]
no wonder he uses his custody to let you buy your own clothes / he has no idea
what a young lady should wear / that batik dress like something from the garbage
/ a hippie would wear that / you’re my daughter and you’ll dress like my daughter
[vireo trice]
In the third section of earthwork, the content of the poems shows a shift in the speaker. The poem “in the end my mother’s clothes” explores the idea of laying out her mother’s clothing in a field because
she only wore clothes to obey brutal codes
that her shadow-psyche devised ////
mother, reveal
your whole
self
at last!
Here, the speaker craves closure and seeks to leave behind the awe-struck child-view of her mother and also the hurt her mother caused that she sees now in adulthood. Likewise, in “the assignment for healing, ” she wants a full picture of her mother and “to tell the whole truth / to these other / survivors of suicide who bare their horrorscenes and wet eyes.” However, despite these powerful moments, the collection refuses to give the reader clear closure and chooses instead to ask, “mother / which world do i belong to,” which leaves the reader to understand the longevity of grief, especially grief which has been complicated by abuse. Nevertheless, the exploration of the “whole truth” across the poetry in earthwork implies healing is in progress for the speaker and the reader leaves shaken but hopeful.
Khoury’s meticulous and impressive control of language and structure in earthwork invites readers to confront their own responses to loss, ultimately leaving them to choose between acceptance, rebellion, indifference, or hope. The collection is forceful yet meditative and offers profound insight into grief’s complicated nature. earthwork grounds its reader in the complexities of the human condition and Khoury fosters a powerful experience that is as rewarding as it is painful to read. Readers leave earthwork shaken, but with a glimmer of hope for healing.
In case you missed it—here is Khoury’s poem from The Shore:
an edge | is like a separation without an ending